Outside, trees are covered in snow. The leaves are cold almost solid like a rock. The gray sky is foggy with snow falling down from the sky. It is calm and still like a tree stump. The bird was trying to get back to its nest. First the bird feathers were covered in snow. The bird fell to the ground then suddenly it was to foggy for the bird to see. Then he got back up and the snow stopped. The bird flew all the way up and got to it nest. And is that winter.
Friday 26 July 2019
Winter
We are learning to use describing words. I liked describing the fog. I found it tricky to get it finished in time because it was hard figuring out words.
Outside, trees are covered in snow. The leaves are cold almost solid like a rock. The gray sky is foggy with snow falling down from the sky. It is calm and still like a tree stump. The bird was trying to get back to its nest. First the bird feathers were covered in snow. The bird fell to the ground then suddenly it was to foggy for the bird to see. Then he got back up and the snow stopped. The bird flew all the way up and got to it nest. And is that winter.
Outside, trees are covered in snow. The leaves are cold almost solid like a rock. The gray sky is foggy with snow falling down from the sky. It is calm and still like a tree stump. The bird was trying to get back to its nest. First the bird feathers were covered in snow. The bird fell to the ground then suddenly it was to foggy for the bird to see. Then he got back up and the snow stopped. The bird flew all the way up and got to it nest. And is that winter.
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Great story Dougie, I like how you described the leaves being so cold they are solid like rock.
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